tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5237112298292560060.post1509412268739422003..comments2023-05-09T02:41:44.402-07:00Comments on All Boys, All Blogged: 2014-2015: All Boys, All Blogged: February 18, 2015kleclairehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03942217584894176389noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5237112298292560060.post-72955472481374308372015-02-18T06:29:57.014-08:002015-02-18T06:29:57.014-08:00Hello, Ms. Leclaire I would like you to give me fe...Hello, Ms. Leclaire I would like you to give me feedback on the first half of my second body paragraph, I feel like it isn't very strong so I want to know what areas I can improve. I would also like you to give me feedback on my second topic sentence, I feel like it's weak so I need to buff it up. Hope your son it doing good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16890817079723176105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5237112298292560060.post-33880086922022065612015-02-18T06:29:35.952-08:002015-02-18T06:29:35.952-08:00Hi, Mrs. Leclaire! I would appreciate if you could...Hi, Mrs. Leclaire! I would appreciate if you could gig me feedback on the following two items: whether my sentences of analysis tie back to my thesis or not, and am I going into depth enough <br /><br />thanks Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5237112298292560060.post-15517211990112970152015-02-18T06:28:30.306-08:002015-02-18T06:28:30.306-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com